If you've locked yourself for as long a time as it takes for a lock to rust, are you really seeking freedom?
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Nice Haiku :)
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Nice blogger name :) dusty key cannot...the first line itself is so catchy :) loved my stay here :)
Thank you everyone!
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Excellent write!
Deep one. Like it.
Great haiku and I loved the last line.
It sounds like an impossible situation!The Lock Begins to Sing
Nice
I love the theme of your blog.. very pleasant! :)I like the meaning that comes out in my mind reading ur haiku... Flavors of experience!
loved this haiku :)
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If you've locked yourself for as long a time as it takes for a lock to rust, are you really seeking freedom?
First of all I like to compliment for a nice blog name and the punch line!
Message was clear in the haiku, but I took a second read to understand, Nice!
Nice Haiku :)
dusty lock unlock..
very nice
Nice blogger name :) dusty key cannot...
the first line itself is so catchy :) loved my stay here :)
Thank you everyone!
Hey Lovely haiku ..
Thanks for sharing ..:)
Way2express
Excellent write!
Deep one. Like it.
Great haiku and I loved the last line.
It sounds like an impossible situation!
The Lock Begins to Sing
Nice
I love the theme of your blog.. very pleasant! :)
I like the meaning that comes out in my mind reading ur haiku...
Flavors of experience!
Thank you everyone!
loved this haiku :)
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