Welcoming thoughts flooded his mind
Thoughts of a yesterday lost in time.
A song once forgotten
A soulful rendition
reminding him of a place divine.
A place that boasted of a thousand suns
The brilliant light that blinded him at once.
A magical memory
A sweet tranquility
They all came back, quickening his pulse.
Wasted had he, a love so pure
The reason being, he was quite not sure
A squandered chance
At a perfect romance
And so he stood in a heavy downpour.
Wondrous though are the works of fate,
Setting right a grave mistake
Setting right a grave mistake
A folly of youth
A declaration of the truth
And so they hug in a tight embrace.
9 comments:
Beautiful, what a way to express what someone missed first time. Lovely poem, love the rhyming and choice of words.
Saru
Thanks a lot for the kind words :)
:) I liked the simplicity and the last paragraph nailed it...
[_]@ Cheers
Chintu Singh
Thank you Chintan!
its so so good.. :) :)
loved reading it.. :) :)
Thanks, Arpitha!
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This is a beautiful poem with really nice choice of words!
Beautiful poem penned down right here...
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